failed for you

i know i failed

i didnt want you

well not now anyways

when i had money

when i could give you what i didnt have

i  hope you wont hold it aginest me

i know i failed

i cant give you

life you deserve

i failed big time

i didnt want you

well not now anyways

all i have is love

that doesnt give you much

today, tomorrow

ill wish i had thought

then you wouldnt suffer

like me

youd have more than love

i wish i waited

to give you the life you deserve

its me and you now

i know im not ready

i know i failed and im sorry

i hope you understand

i love you but i didnt want you

Reviews

[Brandi Nicole]

i can very much identify with the feelings conveyed here. touching the human soul, creating a connection, through your words, with someone you have never met......well, i would say that is what poetry is all about! congratulations taylor :)

[Priscilla Sayers]

I completely agree with Coyote. Intense is the feeling, loss is the point, and to have loved the one you believe you have failed. I see a lot of underlying meaning here Taylor. you did a great job on this poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with honest and direct words. Better to be honest then to create a liar paradise that will fall apart. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[sivan]

deeply conflicted with self pain and selfless selfish actions

[Rene Velez]

pretty deep premise, tinkering on the edge, well done...