love

love

A Poem by taylorrose

he came

just like fall

he went

just like fall

but he took something

my heart

to never believe it

to never want it

he came

he went

but he gave me something

more than i can say

to never believe it

to never want it

to feel something you dont

he came

just like fall

he went

just like fall

making me wish

id had wanted

the same as he

what is this

this thing they call love

that haunts me

he came

and went

just like fall

leaving me wondering

WHY

© 2011 taylorrose


Author's Note

taylorrose
this poem is also about the thoughts of love which i wish had never happened for me.

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A great job, pondering.....
I like the confusion you express of love, And confusing it is until that very moment that you realize what it is and only you will know...Suggesting listen to "Not Like The Movies" by Katy Perry.
Very insightful as far as the true reality of love....

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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A interesting poem. Fall seem to fade away slowly. The color change allow us to watch the green turn to many colors. I like the ending to the very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it But Never Regret love even if it hurts

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yeah well we wish many things didn't happen and yet they seem to occur and effect our lives so distinctly its confusing as to whether we wanted them all along...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great job, pondering.....
I like the confusion you express of love, And confusing it is until that very moment that you realize what it is and only you will know...Suggesting listen to "Not Like The Movies" by Katy Perry.
Very insightful as far as the true reality of love....

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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taylorrose
taylorrose

marshalltown, IA



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you learn to live your life your way. you earn how to free yourself from your own demons. in the process you find love in the most delicate places. this is my life and I own it. more..

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