what a secert you became

what a secert you became

A Poem by taylorrose

he is a secert

i just couldnt keep

my love for him was to much

he is a secert

i just couldnt keep

he wanted something i didnt

he is a secert

i just couldnt keep

something so little

he is a secert

i just couldnt keep

he wanted it

more than i

he is a secert

i just couldnt keep

i really loved him

he is a secert

i just had to tell

about how i met

the man who wanted you

more than i wanted you

he is a secert

i just couldnt keep

for myself

he is a secert

i just had to tell

for he wanted you

more than me

but i loved him

so the secert you became

now you are the secert

i just couldnt keep

© 2011 taylorrose


Author's Note

taylorrose
this poem is about thoughts and things than will happen and it targets many teens when they finally reach that point. i hope you enjoy.

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Good write:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

secert or secret??

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A nice poem of thoughts and desire. Sometime we hold on to sweet dreams in mind and on a sheet of paper. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poignant scribe

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's a sad truth... good write

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well I did...actually I've been through one of these situations...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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taylorrose
taylorrose

marshalltown, IA



About
you learn to live your life your way. you earn how to free yourself from your own demons. in the process you find love in the most delicate places. this is my life and I own it. more..

Writing
He was He was

A Poem by taylorrose