kal ho naa ho ( tomorrow may not be)

tomorrow may not be

for your time is now

to make a difference

tomorrow may not be

for your time is now

to love one another

tomorrow may not be

for your time is now

to make friends

tomorrow may not be

for your time is now

to live life fully

tomorrow may not be

for your time is now

to be all you can

tomorrow may not be

Reviews

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

I am not to big on repetition but other than that the flow was great, and the meaning was truly let out. I wont criticize it for the repetition because thats just me and you might not like the way that I write so I want you to look at the content as well just not the way it is written. So all in all a good piece.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Short message here...
Nicely worded

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are very wise in the poem. No guarantees in life. Need to celebrate each new day and find something to create pleasure and laughter. I like the words
"kal ho naa ho". Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Very true. "Tomorrow may not be" - Love the title too. The poem is lovely. To make it stand out, I would break up the lines, so it's not in block form. Still yet, very lovely indeed. :)

[paradise]

I like this tommorrow i will read this agan

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great and the title reminds the same named bollywood movie :)

[Enigma]

I'm not loving the strong use of repetition but the words are used very effectively and the message is clear enough. Very nice.

[Life Is like Trust...It..]

I agree,for your poem is a very inspiring one. If you continue your fabulous work you'll soon be a poet at heart

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i liked it...you shouldn't wait for tomorrow you should live in the moment...

[Aly Jones]

This is very motivational.

[Rene Velez]

good write, yes never save for tomorrow what you can do today...