invisible to the world i created

invisible to the world i created

A Poem by taylorrose
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if being accepted means to hide yourself then why do we need to be accepted when we will just hide from areselfs.

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its a scary thought

as it crosses my mind

im getting older

more wise

but also more invisible to the world

they do not see me

im white as a ghost

see through

its a scary thought

as it crosses my mind

im older now

more wise

im not sure they see

im tucked away into my world i created

its lonley there

a world where fears do not excist

where family loves

where people get along

a world i created

is no longer safe for me

im getting older

im getting wiser

but also becoming invisible to the world

its a scary thought

as it crosses my mind

im invisible to the world i created

© 2011 taylorrose


Author's Note

taylorrose
this poem is not about understanding its about growing up to be what others want us to but then we choose to do different and we become invisible to what we want and forget who we are.

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I like this poem. Your words are true. With age we learn we are not so important. BUT it is not true. One person can change the world with desire and strong heart. I believe it is our choice. Be invisible or do something to change/help this world. A very good poem. Open the door to a long discussion. A excellent poem.
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I like this poem. Your words are true. With age we learn we are not so important. BUT it is not true. One person can change the world with desire and strong heart. I believe it is our choice. Be invisible or do something to change/help this world. A very good poem. Open the door to a long discussion. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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taylorrose
taylorrose

marshalltown, IA



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you learn to live your life your way. you earn how to free yourself from your own demons. in the process you find love in the most delicate places. this is my life and I own it. more..

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