whats this

you looked at me with percing eyes
your lips move to the sides of your face
you look at me and glace in her direction
i turned to see the beauty
the girl in the purple dress her hair pulled behind
her smile that lights an area
the girl walked up and smiled at you and sat down
i turned to look at you but saw you looking at her
i stood up and said goodbye
you came after me to ask me
i turned with tears dripping from my eyes
you stared wondering why
it was like you didnt know what you did wrong
i turned away and kept going
you screamed my name everyone turned to stare
you called three times that night
the next day i was walking to the bakery when i noticed you with her
i looked in the window and saw you to laughing
tears began to fall from my eyes and i turned to walk away
but i saw you stand up and she handed you a folder
i cried as i walked down the street i was so upset i didnt see
a car comming straight at me
it hi me and i lay there
i close my eyes as the abulance arrives
i hear them yell where loosing her then im gone
i reach heavens doors finding others in line
the beauty of heaven
i reach god so soon and he says to me
im sorry but its not your turn yet
before i go i see my family telling me to go
i wake up in the hospital bed
i see you crying there at my feet
then you notice and yousay to me
i messed up big time i never knew what i had till you was gone
i said to you i never got to say the words i feel
there is no us and tomorrow there still wont
you cant keep your eyes off that girl
i know why now because shes prettier and skinnier
then the doctor walks in and says mam your pregnant
the baby is just fine and he leaves
i say i have my family go find yours

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My goodness this is heart tugging
I really enjoyed this emotional write.
So well expressed feelings.