Dog

about my dog

New, boundless space here
huge, black excited pupils
panting, fresh soreness.

Mature, enjoying
here, with me for many years
boy, time has gone by.

Now, crippled by age
panting, old injuries hurt
rest, you deserve it.

Author's Note

any reviews and comments are appreciated.

Reviews

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

This is a wonderful Haiku write, you summed up a dog's life with a beginning, middle, and end. Enjoyed!