sometimes...

sometimes...

A Poem by taylorgriffin.

i sit here waiting. waiting for something to remove me from this place. a black hole sounds nice right about now. it could rise up from beneath this prison and take me away. maybe to a different dimension. one where i’m you, and your me. and then you’ll finally know what its like to walk in my shoes. sure they’re a little trashed and the souls are wearing out but they still keep me safe and thats what counts. its a little bit like life. i make mistakes. i f**k up sometimes. sometimes i make decisions that aren’t the best. but at least i’m trying to make something of myself,to at least make some sort of difference. 

1 Peter 3:14

But even if you should suffer for what is right, you are blessed. “Do not fear what they fear ; do not be frightened.”
Take Courage

© 2010 taylorgriffin.


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I adore this. I love the bold and italics. It adds a visual interest along with emphasis. It reminds me of a slampoem I heard the other night. I'll be sure to check out more of your work.

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Added on October 29, 2010
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stanton, CA



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