No One To Trust Now

This poem is about an ex-boyfriend of mine.

I wish you were here.

You left me with so much fear…

I forgot what its like,

To have you by my side.

We used to fight in almost every way.

But we always made up before

the end of the day.

I still wish you were here,

But you will never change.

It seemed to me you thought our

Love was a game.

You left me alone in the dark.

I was so scared to talk to you.

Because when I did, all you did was scream.

I never thought someone could be so mean.

You made me cry, almost every day.

I had no one to go to. And you had

nothing to say.

So now I’m alone. No one is here.

I have no one to trust.

You left me filled.

Filled with nothing but

fear.

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think of my writing. Anything i could've added or shouldn't have added.
Thank you.

Reviews

[17thWhitePrince]

wow ... that was really deep-felt ... very nice indeed ... a lot of emotion and sadness ...

[Tas]

This is a really good poem i felt wat you were feeling (that doesnt happen alot with me) it was really good nice structure and nice ending, keep on writing, cant wait to see more.

[barricade]

aches of missing someone...of a broken relation..of being left all alone...the fear, the loneliness...well portrayed...

keep those words flowing...go with the emotions...

regards
Barricade

[Wildecat]

This is a very good poem, for 14 soon to be 15 this is very well penned. Thanks for sharing.

[enuf]

Thus is a very heart felt piece very nice, have a look at one of mine What is a Woman let me know what you think

[Scott]

You Have A True Gift.