Rain On Me

A sweet poem. <3

Rain down on me,

 

Rain down on me with all your love.

 

Shower me with your kisses.

 

Be my umbrella during the storm.

 

Be the fire that brings my warmth

after the tears.

 

Rain down on me,

 

Remind me what you can do,

what we can be.

 

Rain down on me,

influence me with your drops of wisdom.

 

Rain down on me,

Always be there,

Just like the tears that are shed everyday.

Reviews

[Ina Waltz]

I was actually humming while reading this. The melody was soft and made me feel warm inside. You can see the love while you read this! Amazing piece!

[Taylor Ann]

Thank you so much :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

very lyrical...almost a song.....Great pace and description

[Taylor Ann]

Thank you

[Lost in Wonderland]

Lovely poem:)
"Remind me what you can do,

what we can be." I have felt that way alot
God Bless

[Taylor Ann]

Thank you so much :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

no problem:)

[Gigglez]

This has a very melancholy kind of beauty. I really enjoyed it.

[zainul]

"Rain down on me"


Sweet words like the hum of bee.

[Persephone]

Great poem! I love the "influence me with your drops of wisdom" good imagery here. Thanks for sharing :)

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I love the anaphora of this piece. It emphasizes your beautiful message :) Great job, Taylor or TayTay or which ever you like lol:)

[Taylor Ann]

Lol thank you :)

[BLBrown]

Love the poem, love the message, love the repetition of the phrase. But your use of weather related words is the cleverest of all. Love it! Keep writing!!

[Taylor Ann]

Thank you so much :)