On the whole subject of bullying, in all honesty I am getting rather tired of "Bullying" being the reason for 'so much depression', the flow was good, it was just the subject matter has sort of run it's course. Structure was good, but for myself, the subject is one of those I tend to avoid on account of cliche's (which weren't here but in a lot of other Anti Bully Poetry)
Wow, what a superb writing !! Loved the anaphora, it makes it look like a ballad, plus all the couplets are full of pathos and complex in their simplicity, they resume perfectly a very tough feeling to describe, that's definitely one of my favourite poems so far :) THANK YOU FOR SENDING ME RR FOR IT
loved the message. I got bullied a lot on school. This was fantastic
Posted 12 Years Ago
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This is so honest and when I read this, I went back and reread it more times than I can count. This poem is one of those that you really connect with. I've been here, and all of the feelings you jotted down summed up all of what I went through for years. :,) I love it!
On the whole subject of bullying, in all honesty I am getting rather tired of "Bullying" being the reason for 'so much depression', the flow was good, it was just the subject matter has sort of run it's course. Structure was good, but for myself, the subject is one of those I tend to avoid on account of cliche's (which weren't here but in a lot of other Anti Bully Poetry)
I like this a lot, for me, i understand it very well, however in my mind i would want to lash out at the bully.. obviously through your beautiful writing, you express differently. I loved this! -s
27. About to be divorced from my abuser. Trying to heal, and still searching to find who my true self is and where my soul feels peace. My life is a constant battle of how tough can I truly be. I have.. more..