Hi or Hey

Hi or Hey

A Poem by Sunflower

a simple hi or hey
makes my day
when it comes from you
but it hurts too

i love you still
against my will
in way too deep
these feelings i shouldn't keep

i want you back so bad
you don't because i make you mad
i'm not the girl you want
i stand here giving you everything and it is still not enough.

© 2012 Sunflower


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I just read an article by a guy who
just worshipped his girl and she did
him wrong. He got to wondering why.
He found out.
Some women (his) have a sex thing about
abusive men. They dont enjoy the nice
guy for the same reason.
Sorry---
---- John

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very good poem. I can relate to this a lot. Excellent write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I just read an article by a guy who
just worshipped his girl and she did
him wrong. He got to wondering why.
He found out.
Some women (his) have a sex thing about
abusive men. They dont enjoy the nice
guy for the same reason.
Sorry---
---- John

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sad...I wish he didn't treat you so crappily, I know you love him like crazy...it really says a lot in a few lines. Good job Taya.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sunflower
Sunflower

Kendallville, IN



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27. About to be divorced from my abuser. Trying to heal, and still searching to find who my true self is and where my soul feels peace. My life is a constant battle of how tough can I truly be. I have.. more..

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