Look You Just Need Friends.

to close those beautiful eyes,

Look inside.

to believe in yourself,

You don't want their help.

to chase a dream to be everything,

Just to whisper one thing.

to cry yourself to sleep every night,

     Need a good dream, a goodnight.

to try to make them see your pain,

Friends try to help you stay sane.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

some very clever word usage and some highly provocative thinking, this works well, in spite of the obvious rejection of help from outsiders, i think it's touching and poignant. sometimes we all go there though...in your defense. sometimes we just want our own special little universe..if this was your message, it worked.

[shweta]

all of us feel the same way sometime or other, but only a few like you put it down so beautifully.

[Becky Clancy]

I like it (:

[Alex Vidmar]

I like the way you wrote this, it's very different, using the words in the title to start off the sentences that matter most

[Your Perfect Disaster]

I love it.....

[Chris]

Perhaps we both have a very real understanding... but our perceptions reflect our selves as well.