Come Here, Up There

Come Here,

fine just listen from over there,

I have something to tell you,

i don't know if it matters to you.

I am dying,

wait no, stop crying,

I need you to be strong,

the doctors who told me i was okay were wrong.

i'm sorry honey,

not even money,

could save me now,

i'm sorry honey you have to be strong now.

I will always be in your heart,

I have always been there, since the start,

I love you so very much,

Just remember life can be tough.

I will always listen just talk to me through your prayers,

i will always listen, because i care,

I can't always show you i am still here,

But i am listening from up there.

Reviews

[Chris]

We're all born "terminal" its just the timing that bites... Its up to us to make the meaning regardless of the age. Another one...12 that knew she couldn't make 13 said it best: NEGU..

N(ever) E(ver) G(ive) U(p)... NEGU

Take care lil one... I hope it was memorex but you earned being heard - regardless.

[Your Perfect Disaster]

Taya you're stronger than you think you are. Suicide is the cowards way out you know (didn't u read that book?) If you at least don't want to stay for yourself, stay for the ones you love who you'd be dragging down with you.

[Alex Vidmar]

I really like this. Very good. I'm putting it in my library. The one thing that concerns me is that most of your poems are (or seem to be) about suicide. To each their own, but still. Otherwise, Love it.

~Alex

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Beautifully expressed. My heart felt every word.

[jennifer little]

great poetry good job

[Reaper]

good flow, good expression of emotions, well done

[xSamilynnx]

wow ur really good i like this alot :D sad but nicee

[Finally Fallen]

very good write taya keep it up

[Kiara]

Taya, I really hope you aren't serious about this. You're worrying me.