Come Here, Up There

Come Here,

fine just listen from over there,

I have something to tell you,

i don't know if it matters to you.

I am dying,

wait no, stop crying,

I need you to be strong,

the doctors who told me i was okay were wrong.

i'm sorry honey,

not even money,

could save me now,

i'm sorry honey you have to be strong now.

I will always be in your heart,

I have always been there, since the start,

I love you so very much,

Just remember life can be tough.

I will always listen just talk to me through your prayers,

i will always listen, because i care,

I can't always show you i am still here,

But i am listening from up there.

Reviews

[Chris]

We're all born "terminal" its just the timing that bites... Its up to us to make the meaning regardless of the age. Another one...12 that knew she couldn't make 13 said it best: NEGU..

N(ever) E(ver) G(ive) U(p)... NEGU

Take care lil one... I hope it was memorex but you earned being heard - regardless.

[- - -]

I'm sad I missed this one...I'm sad that you probably featured it because you feel this way again...I'm here for you Taya, you knowz that.....

[asdarkeyesclose]

'I will always listen just talk to me through your prayers,
i will always listen, because i care,'

poignant and heartbreaking. lovely expression and so much sadness and pathos. fantastic.

[Paige Allison Willmont]

This is such a strong poem. Amazing job.

[Jabriel]

yes this was deep..

[maddie]

I loved the emotion put into this sensitive subject.

[Jordan's Back]

This is Really deep and sad, and I just cant find the descriptors to relate how i feel about this. Excellent work!

[Humor Me]

simple and full of emotions just like it the way you expressed it man keep up the good work :)

[SlipKnoT]

that reminds me of my ex boyfriend who has a heart condition :( his name is tyson and i miss him :( :(

[MandaBear]

Beautifully expressed

I love this poem. It's so down-to-the-truth, it's beautiful. Good job on writin this poem! It's very good.