Spiral

he has a jeep,

she doesn't sleep,

he is happy and smiles,

she has been wanting to die for awhile.

he seems so much better,

she seems to start being deader,

he laughs at jokes,

she is asked "are you okay?" she chokes.

slowly he is finding more girls,

slowly she is falling into an unreachable spiral,

waiting he is finding everything he wants,

waiting she is finding every reason to cut.

he doesn't want her,

she is dying without him,

he will never love her,

she will always love him...

Reviews

[hmm]

Deeply emotional, yoru last stanza is my favorite.
Awesome writing skills you have. Awesome!
100/100