Hit Me

Hit Me

A Poem by Sunflower

make fun of me,
maybe i would too if i was free,
why am i like this,
why am i the one who wont be missed...




yell some more,
call me a mother f*****g w***e,
you are no better than i,
isn't that right mom, do you still think i should die?





let me just leave,
obviously you don't understand nor see,
the pain behind my always changing eyes.
all that is there is from your truth, realities lies.






Come at me, hit me,
I dare you to slap me,
I will punch you in the face,
I will finally put you into your place.




forget about me, i'm gone,
forgive me, your wrong,
regret not telling me you did care,
i don't f*****g want to hear it, so stare.




goodbye,
i'm not listening to you anymore,
I am spreading my wings to fly,
oh, by the way i'm not a w***e.

© 2012 Sunflower


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ATG
A very powerful poem. It shows that is a personal topic which is unfortunate to hear. As for the poem, it was well written and did a good job at conveying the emotions behind an abusive parent. I did like how you moved the stanzas around the way you did. It added a nice touch. Overall, the poem was great.

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this is so powerful my heart breaks when I read this! the way you write is unbelievable and this poem was really sad because I bet many people could relate to this

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very powerful poem. kinda hits you where it hurts

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Taya, your mother cares. She just has a terrible way of showing it. :/

Posted 12 Years Ago


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ATG
A very powerful poem. It shows that is a personal topic which is unfortunate to hear. As for the poem, it was well written and did a good job at conveying the emotions behind an abusive parent. I did like how you moved the stanzas around the way you did. It added a nice touch. Overall, the poem was great.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a sad poem. The situation is so terrible. I could feel the pain in the words. I thought you did a nice job conveying your emotions. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Sunflower

Kendallville, IN



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27. About to be divorced from my abuser. Trying to heal, and still searching to find who my true self is and where my soul feels peace. My life is a constant battle of how tough can I truly be. I have.. more..

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