Stand In The Rain

I can stand in the rain,

and make it through the storm,

you couldn't stand in the rain,

you fell down.

Stand in the rain,

Feel each drop on your face,

Let the wind whip your hair in every direction,

Take a step forward toward a new scene.

In this place were a dream is reality,

is reality just a dream,

or is it just a key,

to our hope for how everything seems.

But i,

stand in the rain,

I could die,

But it won't be a everlasting pain...

It will come another day,

So why not stand in the rain,

Make it, make you feel beautiful,

not so dull.

You should know that you are okay,

So stand in the rain,

let it take away your pain,

at least the pain from today...

Author's Note

reviews?...

Reviews

[Chris]

It seems you paused with soooooooo many and yet so few can come by... it prolly isn't because they didn't want to. Life gets complicated and happens when you don't expect it.

A good flow and the content is valid and well reasoned...

As a comment, Few things are as full of feeling as when you stand and just letting the rain wash over you... sort of flow THROUGH you. And the rhythm of it the feel of the wind gusts... Well, you spoke well.

Take care,
Chris

[Jordan's Back]

In this place were a dream is reality,
is reality just a dream,
or is it just a key,
to our hope for how everything seems.

Very Profound muse.............

[J. J. Nightingale]

Some can't stand the rain .. I've held many umbrellas and hands .. Still some fell and never could quite get up again .. You write like a well seasoned soul .. And a trooper in the rain ..

Well Said .. Jasmine

[Daenerys]

This is awesome! Loved it :)