Secrets

Secrets

A Poem by Sunflower

What 
Happens
When
    No
One
  Is
There?
   


You
Are
Completely
Alone,







What
Happens
When
The
Lights
are 
out?






Secrets






Become






Scars...

© 2012 Sunflower


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The format is nice on this. It reminded me of scars that one might put on their wrist who might be lost in the dark and is alone with no one to turn to. This piece is very emotional. I can relate to this one well. Short and to the point in this one. Not a bad write. Keep up the good works of art that is in your writing and keep up the great writing in general. Cant wait to read more of your writes to come.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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The format is nice on this. It reminded me of scars that one might put on their wrist who might be lost in the dark and is alone with no one to turn to. This piece is very emotional. I can relate to this one well. Short and to the point in this one. Not a bad write. Keep up the good works of art that is in your writing and keep up the great writing in general. Cant wait to read more of your writes to come.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is true. Nice formatting. Seems hard to write it with that formatting.

~Paige ♥

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sunflower
Sunflower

Kendallville, IN



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