The Closed Doors, The Last One Open

Why am i still here,

Every second brings me more tears,

I want out, to get away,

I don't feel as though i should stay.

Questions flash in my head,

What if i were dead?

Would anyone miss me,

Or wish they could have me around to see?

Would they cry?

Or say why didn't she just try,

Just try some more,

For the ones who didn't close the doors.

Why didn't she come to us,

Why did she feel like she must?

Will they understand,

That i just could not do it or stand.

What if i really did it,

They already call me s**t,

They scream how I am a B***h,

But they don't see the marks of my faital itch.

What if I can't take it anymore,

I feel like i have no more open doors,

But this one,

And after i walk through it I will be gone...

Reviews

[Cosmic kid]

Very heartfelt, my favorite part would have to be, "questions flash in my head", Its just simply beautiful.

[Distant horizons]

extremely emotive write. flows brilliant throughout.

[Andrea]

Your emotions are very powerful in this piece. The way you let them flow come off so true, and almost healing to get it off your chest. this is really well written.