She Loves You

She Loves You

A Poem by Sunflower

The pain left in her eyes,
Can be seen because your lies.

The hurt in her heart,
Will never be healed because you stabbed it with something sharp.

Why did you let her go,
Why didn't you just hold her close?

Did you not know how much she cares,
Did you even notice how much she needed you there.

If you would have just seen her that night,
You would have never ended it, due to fright.

She is nothing without you near,
She needs you to hold her close dear.

Letting her go, was that easy,
Or did you just do it to make her queazy.

How can you look at her and feel nothing,
You held her close, told her she was your everything.

How could you just let that go,
When she has still kept her hope.

Look at this from someone else's view,
No matter how blind, you could see, She Loves You.

© 2012 Sunflower


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i um just read it again hehe :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a wonderful rhyme scheme, much enjoyed the wording

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds like you have been through a lot and i agree words mostly speak for you :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow ur really good!!!! i can relate.. gosh y do ppl have to hurt the ones that love them?? i mean seriously :'(....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can feel the emotion in every sentence of this poem. I can relate. Great write! Excellent rhyming skills!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing, and I can really relate. Nice write :)

~Paige ♥

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel like this too.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is really well written. your voice is very powerful and you really get your point across well. (on another note my exboyfriend really needs to read this cuz this explains my current situation)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sunflower
Sunflower

Kendallville, IN



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27. About to be divorced from my abuser. Trying to heal, and still searching to find who my true self is and where my soul feels peace. My life is a constant battle of how tough can I truly be. I have.. more..

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