She Loves You

The pain left in her eyes,

Can be seen because your lies.

The hurt in her heart,

Will never be healed because you stabbed it with something sharp.

Why did you let her go,

Why didn't you just hold her close?

Did you not know how much she cares,

Did you even notice how much she needed you there.

If you would have just seen her that night,

You would have never ended it, due to fright.

She is nothing without you near,

She needs you to hold her close dear.

Letting her go, was that easy,

Or did you just do it to make her queazy.

How can you look at her and feel nothing,

You held her close, told her she was your everything.

How could you just let that go,

When she has still kept her hope.

Look at this from someone else's view,

No matter how blind, you could see, She Loves You.

Reviews

[Donald Cole]

i see the regret, i like the flow and the means of communicating the message. There seems to always be questions left behind. makes me think.
this is good.
Don

Sad, but really good :3

[Daenerys]

This is sooooo sad. :(

[Jabriel]

i really like reading this :)

[Kiara]

Now I'm crying even harder! -Grabs a kitten- I'm all betters nowwww :D

[Sunny Skye]

Wow! I really like this poem it says so much. Good job.
Kepp up the good work

~Skye Blanco

[Cameron]

This brings to light the view not so often seen. Well written as well, a job well done my friend.

[MandaBear]

It was very awesome. you did a wonderful job. I felt the emotion you had in this poem. Great write keep it up:)

[jennifer little]

great work keep it up

[C.J. Ravenheart]

i enjoyed it