Not the best day

It's not the best day.

What do you do,

When the guy you love through and through,

breaks up with you,

you keep searching for the secret,

He knows really well how to keep it,

But one day it finally slips.

How can this be,

Was it me,

What did i do to make him want that to see,

He isn't happy with girls anymore,

Is it my fault he wants to go behind the closest door,

I can't keep but cry on the floor.

All these terrible things run through my head,

The monster inside was easily feed,

Now its time to never awake again,

Maybe it is just a dream,

That hits too close to reality,

But i don't think thats how it seems.

How can i ever compete to a guy,

Where they have things i can't get under my fly,

Would it be best if i just die?

What will i do,

I still want to tell him 'i love you',

But after all what good would that do...

Reviews

[Kiara]

This had me crying.... :'( :'(

[Your Perfect Disaster]

This is a very emotional poem and a very clean write. Nice job Taya. The rhyme scheme worked with the flow of the peace. I can almost feel the hurt and the pain..... And sometimes the best thing to do is just say it.

[Paige Allison Willmont]

Oh my. This poem shows a lot of emotion, nice job. I liked the Rhyming. Nice work, sorry your going through that. I've just been through Break up, I don't know if I can deal with him being Gay...

~Paige.