Take Joy Beyond

To me you are the sunrise

Bringing me to a better day

From them you feel abandoned

Bringing you to your final days

To me you are the stars

That light up the sky with beauty

From them you feel like darkness

That lights up for nobody

To me you are the ocean

That allows me to dream

From them you feel no emotion

That allows you to forget to breathe

To me you are the most wonderful girl

That makes me complete and free

From them you may walk away

That makes me take your hand because I know we were meant to be 

<3

Reviews

[Kiara]

And now I'm crying haha. You know I hate compliments so I don't understand why you put those in there. I almost said "Eww, compliments, what are those doing in there?" But as I said in my review of the other poem, I need to sort things out in my head and then I'll try harder to treat you better and everything. Right now I just want to curl up in a ball for awhile so please don't take offense that I don't talk to you very often.