My Girl

This is not something i have just made up this comes from the heart and is all true.

I just keep thinking DAMN

how coul i let this be

I lost my girl to him

and now its hard to breath

I just want her back

in my arms she should be

Ive changed back to myself

if only she could see

Ive lost her for now

and probally for good

I would change my mistakes

if only I could

tears streamed from my eyes

as she said its the end

and they flowed even harder

when she said she wants to be friends

I want to look in her eyes

as i lean in to kiss her

and once again she'd be mine

but instead I only miss her

Ive lost her for good

this wasnt the plan in my world

its my fault that now

theres another man with my girl

Author's Note

Mind the grammer problems

Reviews

[averasweetangel]

i really like this poem i understand your point

[Hayley S]

It flows very nicely. I like the sound of it. I never pay attention to the grammer so don't worry. :)

[Simone]

Awesome work. The only thing I saw; "fr' should be for.
Other than that this was a great poem and a truely entertaining read.
It strikes a perfect balance.
Good job.