Numb

A short poem of a girl awoken from a car accident

Numb
couldn't breathe, couldn't feel, couldn't touch,
I was numb.
Wanted to run, wanted to escape, but who with?
there is no one.
Laid in snow, looked up at darkness, black and white,
it was enveloping me.
The white snow I laid in, darkness surrond me, couldn't feel,
what was wrong with my body?
Black spots, darker than the sky, in my vision,
it wrapped around me
and here I was, no longer...
conscious.

Author's Note

Please tell me if there is any grammar problems, punctuation problems, and if it all makes sense and whether it is truly good.