Begging to hell part 1

cold,black,blood,rain.

 

What could be wirse than not knowing your self

 

not knowing kills the giid

side to me.

It's madness.

 

I know i can stop the pain , if i will it all away,

but... with what will.

 

Shivers cole around me as i know hell leads the way.

 

Death played before

my eyes.

 

Damn me the hell, please god,

don't close your eyes on me,

don't turn away from me,

oh please don't turn out the light.

 

But what god have you ever blessed me.

Im so tired of being here,

sapressed by my fears.

 

But I'm now bounded by this life,

these wounds won't heal,

no time can erease this.

 

So get rid of me.

Damn me to hell.

Reviews

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Some spelling errors, but the feeling came across strong, it reminded me of the patriarch Job, and how he suffered, and thought at first God was punnishing him, of course it's not possible for God to do evil to anyone.

Enjoyed it keep it up