Generation Zero

My feet dig

into the concrete

with the weight of this life

and the carcass of god

in the winds above us

Reviews

[Rebecca]

this is great. maybe go back to it and keep writing. continue the story.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this life can get heavy...we can only hope sometimes to abide long enough to see what comes after, and hope they are gentle winds.
I also relate to this on another level..my youth spent in the concrete jungle of the Bronx...and yet that slight wind above for my summers in Vermont...and its gentle surroundings.
a telling image is "carcass of god"
big wow on that one...and what it conjures up.
Is he still there? or just the bones of....