Salmons lament
A Poem by terry smith
The salmon strugglesto swim upstream and spawn in the waters of their ancestors only to die
© 2016 terry smith
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-- wow... a brilliant portrait in very few words... such is life... sadly...
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
you flatter me so with your understanding :)
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8 Years Ago
-- well... a little bird whispered in my ears and said you deserve to be 'recognized'... :p
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8 Years Ago
was it a " humming ' bird ?...lol
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8 Years Ago
-- hahahaha... yes, it was... and it hummed about you incessantly... :p
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8 Years Ago
do i know this "bird" ?
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8 Years Ago
-- well, she hasn't flown to the united states yet... :p
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8 Years Ago
please let me know if she does :)
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8 Years Ago
-- hahahaha... i'll let her know you'll be there at the airport to receive her... :p
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8 Years Ago
when and where :)
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8 Years Ago
-- whenever and wherever she says... she's a lovely bird... she deserves anything she asks for... :p
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8 Years Ago
hope i get to meet this bird someday :)
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8 Years Ago
-- i hope so too... :)
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8 Years Ago
:).......................
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Short and sweet. The salmon perfectly represents the circle of life. With a few words your poem does as well.
Ted
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
thanks...that is what i strive for...leave the rest to the reader...that way it becomes their own.
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Added on January 1, 2016
Last Updated on January 1, 2016
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