How I am feeling today

How I am feeling today

A Story by terry smith

I feel like a cross
between a jewish man
and a Buddist

...like a cell phone
on the moon

...like a Picasso
to the blind

...like that coupon
you have been waiting to use
and you get to the only store
within 400 miles
and it burned down
yesterday

..like watching pandas
in color

...like an ambassadors liaison 
at the international hose of pancakes
and we are out of gooseberry

...like mittens
for a fish

...like a doorbell
for a homeless man

...like that last "i love you"
long after you both know it's over

...wish i felt like a bikini wax on a nun
useless but a little naughty
but i don't.

© 2015 terry smith


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What a fun read, clever, with a message there's always tomorrow but til then lets just let it all out on what I'm feeling in the now. Great Terry

Posted 8 Years Ago


terry smith

8 Years Ago

Thanks................
andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

I always admire your cleverness and wit in your writes. Remarkable!
mittens on a fish sounds logical.... my fav, watching pandas in color.... sounds like a cable subscription I once had....
Now we all know our mother's told us there'd be days like this... and that it would probably be raining, and damn if ya didn't lock yer car keys inside the car again....

But you know, Terry, somehow it gets to be tomorrow.

Posted 8 Years Ago


terry smith

8 Years Ago

thank Larry ,Curly & Moe for that!
chuckled, :) clever little poem...glad to hear your doing just fine...lol

Posted 8 Years Ago


wish i felt like a bikini wax on a nun
useless but a little naughty
but i don't.

This is great! Funny and sweet...and just you baby. Thats why i sent you the barbie cum kisser pic..for a bit of fun naughty!
Love you funny bunny...lol
Xxx jen


Posted 8 Years Ago


terry smith

8 Years Ago

...hop hop...now were is that hole :)

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