Moving In

I didn't mind

all the baggage

you brought

with you.

Just made me

more determined

to get through

to the real you.

Reviews

[Mara]

Great short poem :)!
Thank you for sharing

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kiss your cheek. You're awesome!

[Calamityofgin]

Sweeetness...loved almost as much as i love you.

Always yours
Jennifer

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-- there... right there... is proof of the fact that you're golden-hearted... -- i believe such guys are referred to as gems... not just ordinary ones... but sparkling solitaires... :)

[terry smith]

...i am coal...but if you squeeze me long and hard enough....who knows:)

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-- hahahaha... :p

[jesserose99]

I love this straight to the point says it all. Really nice piece of work.

[terry smith]

Thank you:).............