Moonchild

She walks by 

moonlight

virgin rose petals 

left

from her path

shining 

like teardrops

from some ancient goddess

sad reflective silver droplets

leading a trail

to

the place 

she once 

called home

before she 

gave up

and completely

disappeared

into

the dawn

Reviews

[annalysiar]

Smooth and silky, like the actual portrayal of innocence. Very nicely done

[terry smith]

thanks!!...........

[B]

I love the innocence in this piece
Its gleaming
Quite beautiful you know

[terry smith]

thank you :)

[B]

Why dont you write more
i miss your words
so much

[klawrites]

If only you could see the smile on my face! I'm so glad I came across your work. I love where my mind went when I read this. Very nice!!

[terry smith]

thanks :)............................

[Calamityofgin]

This is stunning sweetheart! I love it..
Reminds me of
"She walks in beauty like the night...
Of cloudless climbs...

All my love
Jennifer

[terry smith]

thanx baby!!:)

[Calamityofgin]

Muuuaasgh! 💋

[jesserose99]

this just flows sweetly...love it.

[terry smith]

thank you!...............

[andrew mitchell]

I liked this , an enchanting magical tale Terry