Succumb

Swimming

in a sea

of confusion

waves 

of misunderstood

emotions

move me

at their will

the cold contradictions

numbing my flesh

to the truth

i used to see

in you

my mind

goes numb

to the light

and 

i sink

down

into

the

darkness

of

humanity.

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

I enjoyed this dark write. Thanks for sharing Terry

[Calamityofgin]

I will cut this b***h. .......

[B]

Its disappointing to see lack of care
The soul only stays alive with a ton of care

[.]

-- i find negative spirals equally intoxicating... -- it's hard to stay positive...

[terry smith]

feeling is feeling...good or bad...i just try to express it

[.]

-- and you are great at being expressive... :)

[terry smith]

thank you !!!......

[.]

:)

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