good bye song

you come

and you       go

stop by just to say       hello

you want                  and you need

take every single thing of me

and leave me here     to bleed

....and then dissapear

memories          flood my brain

like ice cold chills running through my veins

fading fast                    these memories

it's all that remains of you and me     and

all I'm left with is your name

.....ringing in my ears

I know   i look

hallow from the outside

stone cold on the inside 

it's my armor that you see

but that's not really me

and no              I can't be

left alone in this cold world 

without you             to believe in

and so                      I don't see

any other way for this to go

so i think i'll just leave

and no                      don't worry

I blame myself for both of us

I know your my disease

...and it's killing me

hollow on the outside

stone      cold     inside

it's the armor that's protecting me

from this misery

  

you know                I cared

you could see it in my eyes

the nights that we shared

i've been hurt           too many times

to go on feelin

I know that it's not right 

but anything to help me   make it through the night

crumbling on the outside

shattered on the inside

the pain is crushing killing me

i'm in misery

 

I can't take this   no more

just turn out the lights   and close the door

let all         that remains

drop to the floor    and fade      away      with me

bleeding on the outside

dying on the inside

I reach for you         but you can't see

my misery

crying on the outside

screaming on the inside

I know there's no one on the other side

to hear my pleas

Reviews

[...]

Painfully touching and beautiful all at the same time, Terry (((you)))

[terry smith]

thank you Lynn :)

[DeerInHeadlights]

I hear.... stonesour.. yes corey taylor. I cannot help but to hear his voice and the simplicity of the music like the song "bother." or even slipknot "snuff"

[terry smith]

I think a little more passion but they are both good ideas thank you !!:)

[Riley]

painfully real, and so heartbreaking but I can relate.

[terry smith]

tx...........................

[maria ( rose)]

extremely beautiful and delicate. Thanks for sharing:)

[terry smith]

thank you so much!!!:)

[maria ( rose)]

you're welcome !!:)

[Pryde Foltz]

Reality is a mirror to your thoughts … believe me there are many who hear you pleas. Fantastic piece in expression and form, Terry.

[terry smith]

thank you so much!! :)

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

Awesome piece. Loved the flow and the breaks. Really easy to read

[terry smith]

Thanks!! :)

[Emily]

Love the meaning!
Well done!!

[terry smith]

thanks Emily!:)

[B]

I once read that love has such a natural high
and such yearning to be with your significant other
That you reach such a deep low
the only cure is to find that person
wherever they are
and be next to them
for a life time

[terry smith]

yeah I heard that too!!:)

[B]

dont say goodbye
it took you a year to say hello

[terry smith]

hhhhheeeeeelllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllloooooooooooooooooooooo:)

[B]

lol
i cant stop laughing and thats not even funny
i am just laughing like crazy stop it lol

[terry smith]

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeeeelllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllloooooooooooooooo:D

[B]

stop it
i am laughing again
its like you are tickling me
stop it

[terry smith]

ttttttttttiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiccccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!:D

[B]

lol
u r unbelievable
u make everything so nice
thank you

[terry smith]

:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[B]

lol
now i am laughing again
and giggling
how do you do this

[terry smith]

llllllllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[B]

now i am laughing more
stop it

[Calamityofgin]

Yeah doll, kinda sucks when you realise you haven't let them see you were mortal and could be hurt...
Great words. Get a lil pissed for yo self if need be..

Love
Jennifer

[terry smith]

thanks babe....hows sadie doin?

[Calamityofgin]

She's cummin right along....lol have a downright true love for this gal...will show you her spread tomorrow... Muuagh!

[terry smith]

:D.........................

[Calamityofgin]

N you should see the opaque shiny effective ness on mih panties when you call mih babe!!! Lol muuagh!

[terry smith]

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm :D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!