Pangaea

Once we were like Pangaea

but then we drifted

oceans of tears fell

never again for our shores

to touch.

Reviews

[B]

you know Pangaea still touches
at every edge
besides a couple of strays
but it never really separated
it expanded

[terry smith]

did you know you can drive from the tip of south america to the tip of africa or asia :)

[B]

I knew that
I always wanted to go to south africa
there is an area
where u can be standing at the tip actually

[terry smith]

and pretend you are leonardo dicaprio on the titanic :)

[B]

oh you cheesy cheesy bubble gum

[terry smith]

I tried to blow bubbles with swiss cheese bubble gum but.....

[B]

ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
sick

[Calamityofgin]

Ah! What a wonderful metaphor....to imagine a world or two souls in such primal, ancient touch....

Love
Jen

[MickeyJoy]

I love the simplistic truth and raw feelings I felt from reading this.

[terry smith]

Thanks Mickey!!..........

[RomaJ]

An epic love tale in these write. That could've lasted centuries. sigh. but even the stongest of bonds could not withstand the passage of time and the eventual separation. Twas doomed by the fates from the moment, his hand brushed gently upon her breast; ever so lightly....hahaha... loved this.

[terry smith]

you have the best replies :) thanks!

[RomaJ]

Haha I swear I meant to type shores but my finger typed breast lol haha

[terry smith]

your train of thought is showing :)