Your Ocean of Smiles

this one was also inspired by my new pen pal Moonskittles.

I went for a swim

in your ocean of smiles

never wanting to dry off

I lay on the tiles

Moonbeams reflected

off the tips of the waves

revealing it's rainbow

and all of my fav's

Red the color of passion it's you I do see

you are my world...everything to me

 Orange the color of Fall cool autumn nights, stomping on leaves oh how I love it all

Yellow the color of the sun and the stars up above

but it is the moon I love the most

pale like a dove

Green the color of foliage it means growth to me

the dew of it I drink as natures tea

Blue the color of the skies and the sea

so calming and peaceful, relaxing to me

Indigo  the color associated with afterglow need I say more

to rest in the arms of the one I adore

 

Violet the color of lavender the scent helps me sleep

to lie intertwined till the sun it does creep.

Reviews

[B]

someone u really love ,,,,,,,,,,,,, and that smiled changed you
and your entire life

[B]

I guess u r writing about one smile
u saw once

[B]

A rainbow of emotion
to hold
and enjoy

[Amy R]

i absolutely loved this piece!
amazing writer you are!
well done. :)

[~]

Wow ... Speechless .. You're very talented to have written this in no time. I like the color coded format. Impressive!!! :) smiling big!!!

[terry smith]

I told you most of what I write just comes to me...and I write it down...that's how it is for me.I'm glad I made you smile! I dedicated this to you , you inspired it! :D

[~]

i feel honored by such tender act!! you humble me...

[terry smith]

You are silly!! you did inspire me with all the ramblings last night and today...I give credit were credit is due!! :D

[~]

:D :D is that extra credit? hehehe

[terry smith]

Yes!! now clean the erasers!! hahahaha :D

[~]

bahahaha!! good, i feel more comfortable now :D