Love song

lyrics to a song i wrote

Every time i think of you

I can't help but smile

And when i hear your sweet voice

fills me with desire

And when your lips touch mine,

I forget my name

and every time i lay with you...

your driving me insane

driving me insane...

ohh  mmmmmmmmm

I wanna hold you

I wanna touch you

I wanna feel you

I wanna....

hhhmm

And  I               love you

I             love you

your the air I breath

the touch i need

the heart that beats in me

your my fantasy

my wildest  dreams

your everything to me

and I          love you

I            love you

Everytime i think of you

Reviews

[. serah .]

-- ah... this rivulet of adoration flows and flows and flows in your writing voice... and makes the reader want to actually hear it... -- wish i could write songs...

[roarke]

The world needs all the love songs it can get.

[terry smith]

I bought a globe just to give the world a hug every day.

[roarke]

HA, psychologically, I'll bet that actually works.... another spot of genius from Terry. Bravo.

[DeerInHeadlights]

I think it sounds like a love song :) I would like to hear how you do this.. what your melody and rhythm is.. yes. :)

[terry smith]

I am still working on that.It is a slow song think Chris Isaak or Michel Buble...I am so close to it that I am struggling with the guitar /piano part.

[DeerInHeadlights]

hmmm.. as far as guitar.. what is your chord progression ideas?

[terry smith]

I don't know if I could just figure that out I would be set I have been playing notes to match the word tones but nothing feels right

[DeerInHeadlights]

do you mind if i take it and play around with it?

[terry smith]

please do!! that would make me very happy! :)

[DeerInHeadlights]

ok :) i will let you know what i hear.. and come up with. then you can decide if it is your mood or not.

[terry smith]

thank you so much!! :)

[B]

Oh
I kind of wish i could hear this

[terry smith]

imagine slow...Michel Buble like :)

[B]

Micheal bubble
Oh you cant be that confident lol
He is just dreamy :P

[terry smith]

noooo,lol...that is how it is supposed to sound not how well I sing it! lol

[B]

ok
Coz no one can touch Micheal like ever lol

[Emma]

This was really heart felt and genuine. I like it :)

[terry smith]

Thanks, still working on the music to go with the words. :)