Lollipop

At first you can't wait to get me into your mouth,

so sweet and hard against your tongue.

But after awhile you tire of me,

and can't wait  'till i'm small enough,

to get between your teeth,

and break me to pieces....

What will you do when i am gone?

Reviews

[. serah .]

-- this is too dangerous a piece of writing for me to review... :p

[Relic]

~ How many licks does it take.... Well, there's always snickers bars. ha Entertaining little read. Nice writing. ~

[terry smith]

Thank you!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I adore the analogy you brilliantly played upon here, Terry. I must admit, I am a licker...I never bite into a tootsie roll pop until ALL the outer shell has been dissolved in my mouth. It takes some discipline, though...every time! ; )

Kelly

[terry smith]

Ha Ha!! thanks for the nice words!! love your writings also!

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

Why haven't more people picked you up yet? This is spectacularly..what's the word I'm seraching for? Tasteful.

[terry smith]

Thanks, guess people just haven;t read my stuff yet.