love you alwayz

love you alwayz

A Poem by tasnim modi

love you always
love you always

i want your love always
i need your care always
i care for you always
i dream of you always

love you always
love you always

i am nothing without you
you are my dream come true

you are the sunshine of my life
i am proud to be your wife

love you always
love you always

i will never let you down
i will never let you bow

you are my hero
and everyone else are zero
love you always
love you always
i promise to love you always
to love you always

© 2012 tasnim modi


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@pencrafter
thnx a ton

Posted 11 Years Ago


What I like about this poem is the simplicity of statement. The repeating refrain of the basic theme could make it an enjoyable song. We all appreciate having a close friend, someone we can count on. You convey the emotion as well as the thought of commitment. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dear Tasnim,
You have expressed your love to your husband quite eloquently.
Hope this love will always binds you two through divine blessing.
Marvel us with more works.
Best,
Zainul

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Are you really married?
I thought that it was too early to get married .. read more
tasnim modi

11 Years Ago

nah
m engaged js b4 6 months
zainul

11 Years Ago

That's great.
Wish you a congenial conjugal life

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tasnim modi
tasnim modi

gujarat, indian, India



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