Tell Me

This poem is a representation of what everyone feels when they are going through a breakup with someone they thought they would spend the rest of their life with. A part of them does not want to believe this is happening and hopes their other half is only

Before you tell me

See that I am weak

Look into my eyes

And tell me what you see

 

Before you decide to leave

Clear your head for a minute

Listen to your heart once more

Tell me what it says

 

Before you say goodbye

Look at the tears in my eyes

Is this what you really want

And tell me why

 

Before you're gone forever

I just want you to know

That I did love you

at least tell me, you once did too

 

 

 

Author's Note

Comments? What are your interpretations? Did you like this simple poem?

Reviews

[Sheila Marie Carr]

Tasha this was great and it is question most people want to know when someone is breaking up with them, you did a great job putting creativity into your feeling into this poem and I love it

[grim]

I wish I could have written it, mine are not so upbeat and optimistic. I am lost in hell and have stopped looking for the door, don't go that far because the hurts keep getting worse.