The morning light

You say my voice is like the melody of a thousand beating hearts,

So kind and gentle and yet can still breathe fire.

You say my touch is the soft winds kiss,

And the only touch you desire.

You say I smell like your childhood treats,

In which the hardest of candies have the softest of centres,

You say my heart is a mosaic of smashed glass,

And still so fragile and tender.

I see you love all of my senses,

All of my best and worst parts.

And yet I wonder if you'd continue to love me,

Once we step out of the dark.

I see the freckles all over my body,

Are simply imperfect, misnamed marks,

Lets no romanticize it,

And say there a constellation of stars.

I see the white scars across my skin,

A reminder of all of my demons.

Lets not make excuses for what they are,

The war wounds from the darkest of seasons.

So now you see I am a flawed creation,

You see you never know who you're kissing goodnight.

So my dear I have only one question?

Would you still love me in the morning light.

Reviews

[Stephen]

Yup! I'll love you in the morning light as same as I've loved you in all nights, pretty
(I hope, your someone with whom your in love of would give this answer if he really loves you from heart)

I love the the way you expressed your feelings into the words, all the emotions, pain and love came outta from soft heart beating heart. All stanzas're nice and beautifully penned.

Keep up the great work!

[LifeInPoetry]

Thank you for the lovely words Stephen.

[Kate Henderson]

Fantastic writing. Poignant, deep and meaningful. Great work!

[LifeInPoetry]

Thank you lovely.

[Kalen Luciano]

Deep, beautiful, and a splendid read. True talent is inside all of us, but yours is very evident.

[LifeInPoetry]

Thank you very much.

[Sami Khalil]

Truly beautiful and splendid...:)...................

[LifeInPoetry]

Thank you so much:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........................

[paddy d daly]

Deep, yet utterly a breath of fresh air, you reverse sad inner thoughts out into question marks and manage to do it so well....wonderful read.

[LifeInPoetry]

Thank you lovely.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I think this is truly beautiful.
I cant believe you have no reviews.
This is an amazing write, you clearly have talent.
This was romantic, beautiful, emotional, deep and meaningful.
It sounded very very poetic.
I love how you set it out, so it is saying all the things he loves about you, how perfect he thinks you are.
Then you tell him to look deeper and see all the imperfections.
Although im sure to him all those imperfections are also perfect.
Amazing write really enjoyed :)

[LifeInPoetry]

Thank you so much for the sweetest of words! You are so lovely! I'm so glad you understood what I meant. Thank you dear:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your most welcome :)