Whispers in the wind

I wrote this a while back, this is for people who feel as if they arnt really who they want to be, people who are trapped within just waitin for their soul to escape.

Seasons change,
 as do we.
Cut us down,
 to watch us bleed.
Whispers in the wind,
 giving them a fright.
Whilst all of whom have sinned,
 left awake past midnight.
Let me steal your ear,
 so you can have a listen.
A thought to those not here,
 A secret that is hidden.
Aware of the mysteries,
lurking in the pages.
A prayer for the wild at heart,
 forever kept in cages.
Try to catch them, hunt them down,
 burn all the cities, turn over towns.
From Young they were taught,
 how to run but never to stop.
So as you are sleeping
With the lights now fully dimmed
your eyes are closed, so open an ear,
For the whispers in the wind.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Devesh]

Let me steal your ear,
so you can have a listen.
A thought to those not here,
A secret that is hidden.

Loved these lines. You paint a vivid picture with your words. We all feel like we just need to escape, that we are trapped inside a cage, the world is a weight upon the soul. Beautifully expressed, Tasha! :)

[LifeInPoetry]

Thank you so much for kind words:)

[Devesh]

You are most welcome :)

[paddy d daly]

Intriguing and some great lines in this one, ''A prayer for the wild at heart,
forever kept in cages,''
and
From Young they were taught,
how to run but never stop.
excellent,,,,I really loved it....