Control

Control

A Poem by T. Smeltz

I need the meds. I need something to spoil the mood. To plant the seed. Where the garden flowered over my sight. I need the fix. I need the mix to change the tone. The tune banging in circles. To change her mind. I need mind control. Event control yes event control. To splice the film the way I want. To control. The meds to control...myself. I knock but I've lost. I've lost...myself.

© 2012 T. Smeltz


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I like the need and desperation in this poem. Sometime we depend on things to make us strong. They will tear us down in the end. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on June 18, 2012
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T. Smeltz
T. Smeltz

wilmington, NC



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