Just Us Two

Just Us Two

A Poem by T. Smeltz
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love poem

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I've never felt this way, the way I feel about you. 
I want to be here, just us two. 
You are more beautiful than your eyes will let you see. 
But I know your beauty runs forever, so far and so sweetly. 
My heart is full of passion and concern. 
I want to hold you and rock you like a ship at sea from bow to stern. 
I will miss you and think of you every chance I get. 
I've never felt this way and I know it's crazy because we've only just met. 
What you do to me is unbearable unless I'm with you. 
My skin wants to be here, just us two. 
I like you a lot. I don't know if I can handle this hot 
and dry desert but I know you will be fine so I need to be here for you, just us two and shine. 
Because I believe there is One here who loves you,
more than I ever will or will know how to. 

© 2012 T. Smeltz


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"I want to hold you and rock you like a ship at sea from bow to stern.
I will miss you and think of you every chance I get. "
I like your style of writing. Remind me of the old writers like my favorite writer Nevil Shute. I like the thoughts and the desire in the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 16, 2012
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T. Smeltz
T. Smeltz

wilmington, NC



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