Five

Five seconds ago you were mine, I swear it

A mere

one

two

three

four 

five

But now, I only see your silhouette in the distance

Roaming farther and farther away from me

And now it's five months later and I still hear the clock strike backward

five 

four

three

two 

one

Into the depths of your blue

Author's Note

A quick writing done for oneword.

Reviews

[Harrisen Viator]

I enjoy this, because I feel like some people can relate to it. One thing that I do notice is in the very last line you say "your blue" I don't know if "your" is a proper word, because you are the one who is dwelling on the past experience. Other than that it is well written and I like the counting to five and the countdown.

[tarrynyouapart]

'Your blue' is actually a reference to eye color! But thank you for the input!