Struggle

Physically, I'm being fed

Mentally, I'm overwhelmed

Soulfully, I yearn

Like a raging river

Pushing, pulling

Side to side

Who is to blame

Does the fault lie within

How do I unleash

The end to begin?

Author's Note

Need ideas for a title...anyone?

Reviews

[Lover Of Words]

The end too begin
Very Very Very good!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you love :)

[Lover Of Words]

MY pleasure!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Unleashing the End to Begin............love this

[Coyote Poetry]

I know the feeling of this poem. I would call the poem. "Struggle". So many questions were open up by the poem. In the new world. Most of us are looking for the right answers. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[MOON]

Nice write , Fault perhaps.

[Roe]

I think the title should be Who's to blame? It suits the poem well

[TC Dunn]

what about "Raging River" from your fourth line.