Emotionless

My soul has escaped
And I suppose, traveling
Through another dimension
For I have no loving feelings
No desire, no hope
I walk around, empty inside
I look in the mirror
And don't recognize
The image looking back at me
How far away did it go
~ To hide ~

The physical, a dead weight
A shell of helplessness
That's just buying time
At any moment
I will tear open its flesh
To feel the rawness
Of what might be left ~

Satisfaction I will not find
Until I'm lying bloodless
And embracing the deadly
~ Emotionless side ~

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the thoughts and the struggle in this poem. When we seek to understand and figure thing out. Can lead us into darkness.
"The image looking back at me
How far away did it go
~ To hide ~"
Strong statement lead me into wild and good visions. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Lover Of Words]

Love the thoughts on this one

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

no problem

[Tarry Franck]

:)

[Lover Of Words]

Amazing is all i have too say :)

[Tarry Franck]

You're the best

[Lover Of Words]

Aways trying too make you proud

[Tarry Franck]

No need to try - I'm always proud of you :)

[Lover Of Words]

I hope so :)

[Roe]

i love the last stanza great emotion in it