Ballerina

I dance around life

With sad thoughts and

Emotions of my days

Hoping noone will speak to me

Because I have nothing

Positive to say

For I have been led astray,

I search for light to guide me free

Before I fall to the floor

In hopes of handling the darkness

That has been cast upon me,

Knowing I can't move to the light

To take my final bow

And heal these wounds

Until I realize with a

Strong heart and a strong mind

I can mend my torn sole

And embrace a new life,

A new dawn

Hoping of holding

A love that

Heaven will shine upon.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A dancer can move and escape pain for a time. When the dance is done. Must live with thoughts and loneliness.
"I search for light to guide me free
Before I fall to the floor"
I like the positive desire and hope at the end of this poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[DrD]

Analogy is part of the most eloquent areas of poetry. You have touched it well here, my friend and I sincerely enjoyed the read.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much for the kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

I can mend my torn sole
and embrace a new life.
A nice write.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you as well

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Sid]

This is very well written and it is a touching piece and I really like the optimism at the end, the hope you have portrayed...great work!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you also - So glad I'm getting good feed back on this one. It meant a lot to me to write this.

[Lover Of Words]

This is beutiful and touching!! :) Keep up the good work

[TC Dunn]

very nice. I can actually see a ballerina twirling about as I read this. Wonderful flow.

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice write with a positive message, like the very visual approach, good work.

[Patrick]

After your last one I read I took a peek at this and again greatly impressed..think I'll read more. Is it soul or sole?

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Neva Flores!