Ballerina

I dance around life

With sad thoughts and

Emotions of my days

Hoping noone will speak to me

Because I have nothing

Positive to say

For I have been led astray,

I search for light to guide me free

Before I fall to the floor

In hopes of handling the darkness

That has been cast upon me,

Knowing I can't move to the light

To take my final bow

And heal these wounds

Until I realize with a

Strong heart and a strong mind

I can mend my torn sole

And embrace a new life,

A new dawn

Hoping of holding

A love that

Heaven will shine upon.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A dancer can move and escape pain for a time. When the dance is done. Must live with thoughts and loneliness.
"I search for light to guide me free
Before I fall to the floor"
I like the positive desire and hope at the end of this poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Dream Mistress]

good

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[That_Girl]

Beautiful piece, uplifting.

"Strong heart and a strong mind
I can mend my torn sole" *soul (I don't think the spelling was purposeful.. if so, ignore this :) )

[Tarry Franck]

Yes, it was but thank you :))

[Tarry Franck]

There is always hope, you danced words of truth, and you will be rewarded.....
for it. Such a beautiful write my friend xoxo

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much for the kind words.

You're more than welcome dear xo

[Pax]

positivism shines on this poem and its light enlighten my mind...
very beautiful write!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much :)

[Frieda P]

I love the play on words 'sole/soul', this is a very special write, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much. Glad you caught that dear friend :)

[David Scott]

A strong dance! Well done. The philosophy and the write comforting.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much :)

[Becca Bishop]

Good job!! Your imagery is really strong in this one :D :D :D :D

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Mir]

There really is only one word to describe this: Beautiful.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Talal Hussain]

Good positive thoughts, nice composition..

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you ALL for the kind words