The Untamed

Poem

While following my heart

~~The untamed~~

I met a companion

Whose heart was the same,

Within the wind

I asked her to fly

"Yes", she said

Without a sigh,

Through the forest

Our laughter echoed

In the sun

Our smiles shined

Within the water

Our tears flowed

~~Within each~~

~~The other~~

~~We find~~

Reviews

[Jack Kennedy]

I like the structure of this poem and the last three lines are my favorite! Well done

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Jack

[Jack Kennedy]

You're very welcome!

[Lover Of Words]

love the last three lines

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you all so much!!!!

Good write, It tells a good story of friends

[symmetryAsymmetry]

too good!
the last couple of lines stole the show!